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Hi there, I do hope you update real soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. Please post chapter 25 real soon, the suspense is killing me!!!! I can hardly wait to see what they'll do next. Hope to see you real soon.

"fear is the mind killer" heheheeh dune!!! im getting a mental image of chaney (sp?) and paul (right? i cant remember ><) right now...and poor twins..but sci-fi made them pretty hot :D heheh, okay gotta read rest of story, had to review when i saw that :D

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...paul right now...poor twins semi lost both parents...but sci-fi made them pretty hot :D okay i gotta go finish reading..i stopped to review. great story!!

What it is with you and compounding ‘each other’? It’s consistent enough that I have to assume it’s intentional, but incorrect in any case. That’s all with the criticism though for this review, onto your dosage to appease your review addiction.

I enjoyed that the relationship between Zuko and Katara came to the forefront once again, that’s not saying I didn’t enjoy the Angi Kai related chapters, but that the relationship is evolving as the characters are.

Chapter 22 with the dream sequence was a rather unique way of addressing the fears that they have concerning their relationship. The world of the Four Element Nations is a rather spiritual one and you’ve not only remembered that, but included it rather well I think, in having Agni speak with Zuko, and then as I’ve mentioned, the dream demon assuming the form of Katara’s mother and feeding off of Katara and Zuko’s insecurities.

Chapter 24 I know was good in general for the reason that it wasn’t until I was completed reading it, that I realised how much you’d written. And that’s the sign of a good writer or even a good movie, you don’t notice the amount of time spent reading or watching it.

Keep up the good work and I’m looking to only to the completion of “Hot Water” but the story lines that you’ve mentioned and already described in general terms will follow. Until the next time, hope you don’t go into withdrawal and remain severely drugged by reviews.

hey spleef, I have been reading your story for a while now and I wanted to review when I caught up to you. Finally i have. I love this story!! Its addicting cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon, I don't want to have withdrawal syndrome or something.

Love,

tab-sempai

I like how u captured Katara's simplenessand how Katara is more comfortable with Hana. I think that it's disgusting with that noble guy that's really old....ew!
Oh, are Sokka and Aang going to reappear anywhere befre the end of Hot Water?

Yay for the new chapter! I'm kinda surprised that none of the courtiers commented on Katara's outfit (thinking that she has delusions of grandure or something for wearing the gown of the previous consort), but then they may have noticed and it may be an issue later (only the great and almighty Spleef Knows >bows to your gratness<).

Hi there, this chapter was pretty cool. The coronation thing was pretty neat, although the girl with that creepy old head advisor was a little too much. I do hope that Zuko would get around in those he has for the Fire Nation real soon, I think what he has planned sounds pretty interesting. Anyway good luck with chapter 25, I hope I see it real soon like Friday or so. I hope I'm not rushing you, I'm just anxious to see how this turns out. See you later!!!!

Very nice chapter! ^^ I wonder what's gonna happen in the next one... Hehe

Hmmm....Poor Kat, I feel so bad for her. But at least she now has female company! And I wonder, how will the rest of the party go?