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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what could i say..beautiful, enchanting...blah blah. always the same, but that's a pro right? anywho, i liked the ending..it's so relaxing. makes me feel so ... relaxed and happy. but who couldn't be with ZKness? can't wait for next chap^^
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! update! though slightly disappointed about now fluff.
Inner Devil: fluff-
ME: don't say it, i already know, and she doesn't need 2.
Flame: YES SHE DOES!
ME: y?
Flame: well, uh, u c, uh...
ME: just 4get it.
Inner Devil: but-
ME: PUT A SOCK IN IT! ahh, i'll b trying 2 update OAE ASAP, but now, ch. 3 is up.
Inner Devil: fluff-
ME: don't say it, i already know, and she doesn't need 2.
Flame: YES SHE DOES!
ME: y?
Flame: well, uh, u c, uh...
ME: just 4get it.
Inner Devil: but-
ME: PUT A SOCK IN IT! ahh, i'll b trying 2 update OAE ASAP, but now, ch. 3 is up.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story, i hope you review soon.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. I do hope you post chapter 25 real soon. We can hardly wait to see what happens next. Please post it here real soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! THe suspense is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Zutara smut is yum
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter Spleef! ^^ You sure know how to make good details in your stories :) I can't wait to see more ^^
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. This chapter was okay. The funeral was respectful and pretty elaborate. One question: I was wondering how did Kiana died? I hope it wasn't much trouble asking this. I was just curious on how someone who was fine one night died so suddenly? Let us know something about that soon, okay? Anyway good job on this chapter, good luck with chapter 26. See you soon, I'll be offline from Wednesday till Saturday for Thanksgivng break. I'll be back on Sunday, good luck with the rest of this story and Happy Thanksgiving!!!!!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geee, that didn't make me more confused.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEW CHAPTER!!! WOOOOOT! Sad one though, I wonder how Zuko's mom died...Ummm...question though: I most Asian cultures white, not black, is the color of mourning...and everyone in the funeral was wearing black...Writers licence I guess. ^-^ Still tormented over the question of Katara's conditions...OH! By the way, love your new artwork! The one with Zuko, Katara, and their baby is sooooooo cuuuuuuuute! ^-^ Squee!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
marvoluse plot line!
a bit on the agnst side, but the use of character really out weighs that!
GOOD JOB
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marvoluse plot line!
a bit on the agnst side, but the use of character really out weighs that!
GOOD JOB
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