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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good story of Zuko and Katara...I really would like it if you would think up another chapter like thoes bc I loved them all!
Can't wait until chapter 26...thoe it would be better if u continued by makeing Katara pregnate bc she forgot to take her herbs and she got pregnate and Zuko found out.....it would be cool if the baby turned out to be a girl. well thats all I have to recomend....you don't have to take my advice but it might help if u have writers block.
Can't wait until chapter 26...thoe it would be better if u continued by makeing Katara pregnate bc she forgot to take her herbs and she got pregnate and Zuko found out.....it would be cool if the baby turned out to be a girl. well thats all I have to recomend....you don't have to take my advice but it might help if u have writers block.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm a huge fan,hope that the end is coming and the sequel too
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. This is the first Avatar fanfiction I've read so I don't know how it compares to others, but this one of the most well written fic in general that I've read. Looking forward to more!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey finally got around to reviewing this! I usually only read completed or one-shot work, but stories with good plots are definite faves! I have enjoyed all of the ideas, twists, and all of the juicy stuff in between! I have a few of your works as recs, and hope to see more of this story soon! Keep going with all of the religious ideas; they're very interesting and nothing can go wrong when it's your own story!
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just....wow. I've never thought about the religion of the nations before. Appearently you have.
I see nothing wrong with this. At all. It's a wonderful peice of work, all of your Avatar stories are. *sniff*
Zuko...seems a little distraught. Can you tell us how his mother died?
And one more thing. I know you've typed it in another story, but do you know about Zuko's supposed "sister", Zula?
I swear the creators took my idea! My character, Fyiarah, is Zuko's sister...
Ack, sorry to ramble. Love the story. Keep writing!
I see nothing wrong with this. At all. It's a wonderful peice of work, all of your Avatar stories are. *sniff*
Zuko...seems a little distraught. Can you tell us how his mother died?
And one more thing. I know you've typed it in another story, but do you know about Zuko's supposed "sister", Zula?
I swear the creators took my idea! My character, Fyiarah, is Zuko's sister...
Ack, sorry to ramble. Love the story. Keep writing!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Interesting cremated by your relatives. did you love the last episode? Katara kicked butt!!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting ceremony, and I rather like the commentary about the Water Tribe funeral customs. Should be interesting when and if Katara gets up enough courage to talk to Zuko about that. Laters.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was (once again) an unbeliveabul (spelling?) chapter! This story is probobly the best I have ever read on this sight! Have good luck with the rest of the chapters! Update soon! Also: You don't have to answer, but, what was the last thing Zuko had to do? Hopfully you will reveil it in the next chapter!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AW!
Poor Katara...
Me: That was nice of Iroh to shake that old fart off Zuko. GO IROH!
Jun: YEA! (Waves pom poms)
Inner child+Me:...
Poor Katara...
Me: That was nice of Iroh to shake that old fart off Zuko. GO IROH!
Jun: YEA! (Waves pom poms)
Inner child+Me:...