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by Spleef

person Fightingdreamer5
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...that was really good! Shorter than the others but still AWESOME...(
person SleepingDragon13
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! (Bows to Spleef shrine)

Zuko:...ok...now I'm bald...
Katara: Now you will grow out your hair..right?
Zuko: Do I have a choice?
Me+Katara: NO!
person Fightingdreamer5
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He cut off ALL of his hair?!?! Aw, he looked so cute with it! (pout) Anyway...it was really good! Excelent! But I was surprised that Iroh actually HAD a concubine...I really can't amagin that...*shutters*
person Anonymous
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Spleef, what happened to chapter 27 and the reviews for it. I saw both of them yesterday and suddenly they all disappeared. I hope everything is okay with your story, I'm just worried about your latest chapter missing along with the reviews for it. I do hope they'll come back soon. Anyway good luck with chapter 28, hope to see it real soon. See you later!!!!
person Fyiarah
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredible! Awsomeness. Love the flashbacks. Lots of information in those! *hugs flashbacks*
love this chapter, really.
IDEA! Came up with this...late. So that's why it's like the way it is. IrohxZuko. lol. Please suggest it to someone. Or do it, or something. It'd be...amusing.
person Alicia
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude your story so rocks. I love it keep going also could give me some adive to make avatr story of mine own . OI would love it so much if you did. IF you do here my email Adress NekoAmyRose@aol.com. You have the make the NAR cmaptail other words if you don't then you can't reach me.
person margaret
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened to your story? When I went to see if it was updated some of the more recent chappies and the 1st one are missing? Where did they go!!! Please find them I love this story sooooo much!!!!
person bluefreak
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI Spleef!!!. I must say.. i think i'm stalking you.....lolol seriously. i come in here at least 3 times a day everyday since this story first posted; to see if you post any new chapters. I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY.. the plot-Amazing! the characters-WONDERFUL. i love how you portray every bit of emotion so well. ok i know this must be old by now but 1. is katara pregnant?. you havent mentioned it in a while. 2. Since i'm a freak and i love the sex scenes... I think it would be great if Katara was to actually iniate a love scene instead of it always being Zuko(hot stuff). 3. Will she ever tell him how she really feel and how does Zuko feel about her never saying "I love you" back. ok ok i'm going to stop bombarding you with questions. Keep up the great work !!!!
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. A very nice look into the imediate aftermath of the first Agni Kai. And next up should be even more so. Laters!
person Chad
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter Spleef ^^ You always do so well with the details! I can't wait to see the next chapter :)