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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person No Name
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its me again and still up after 30 hours of R&R same if i left a review before ut if i didn't EXCEPTIONAL AND MY ALL TIME FAV AVATAR FIC! Keep up the good work XD
person Anonymous
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. I do hope you passed your exams, I managed to pass mine. I do hope chapter 29 will be here soon, I'm dying to see what happens next. I know you're dedicated to three sites and I respect that. I won't rush you, I just want to see a new chapter here soon, it's about that time, right? Anyway keep up the good work and Happy Holidays!!!! Hope to see you very soon.
person Sala
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that...was good. I need a cigarette...
person legolas_estelstar
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sniff, oh dear spleef! this was a beautiful christmas present. finally a beautiful romantic and NOT pathetic sappy at all chapter. after all theyve been through they deserved happiness. dear spleef, im glad your done with your tests (Which makes me wonder wheter you are in 4th year high school or college) i hope you have peaeful and aqwesome holidays and may God bless you my dear, coz you are a blessing yourself. (i swear, i mean it) i left you my email in case you ever feel down and want to tell someone (its stupid, i know, i mean, you have your own people to tell, you wouldnt tell me, but still, what i mean to say is that im here for you, to listen you out) anyway, i loved this chapter. is it too bold or embarrasing to say that.... you made me believe in love a little more? that i can actually have a relationship like that? i hope your life is happy, and my best wishes. love, estel
person akki818
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD! I READ THE REST OF IT ON AFF. WRITE MORE! I would really like to have more pregnancy talk...just because...I really don't know why. But... YAY! This story so rocks!
person Chou hime
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you evil cliff-hanger-maker...Just kidding! Oh please update soon! I need to know!
person Charmed336
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey spleef i love this story and i hope you continue for some time you could do a lot with this story keep it going. the zuko katara part is getting a little dull and predictable. i know my story isn't all that great and it has a lot a mary sues because my friends are really conservative but i hope you'll take my critisism as a complement. i checked out youre aff story (relly good) and your art. i love it. your art fits your story well and some of it looks real. i also like to draw and im good at it but its hard for me to pull out insperation. hope you do well on ALL of your stories!!
good luck
charmed336
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Katara shows these women what for!
person queenyasha
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What a great chappie!! She still will not say she loves him!! LOL One word stubborn!! I have a suggestion if I may?? I think you need to have her spot so she thinks she is getting her period!! More dramatic and then she gets to deny it!! Just a thought!! As alot of preg women do still get ther p's... Gross, it's supposed to be the only tim you don't have to suffer, but they do!!

Margaret
person v son sayian
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ very nice story, lol I actually found out about it by looking at nashidesei's art picture.
looking forward to seeing the next chappys and sequels to see how everything will turn out