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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person La Dolce
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is he coming back???
person SleepingDragon13
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw!

Inner child: (rolls around laughing)
Me: I thought I told you not to play with drugs!
Inner child: This story is on drugs!
Me: and this is why I hate children! (tackles inner child)
person chickygurl
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
B-E-A-UTIFUL!

The chapter was so sweet and exciting and sweet all over again. Very lovely. You're a great author.

Oh! When I told you hurry up and update, I was kidding. I don't know if you knew that. I should've clarified that when I said it. Anyway, I'm not one of those people who rush...

But sorry if I gave you the impression that I was. I was just kidding. -sigh-

Well, I'll be waiting for your next chapter!! :)
person Zukoscute2
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, i liked it. plz update, i want to know if Katara's pregnant.
person Fightingdreamer5
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Saa...thats a relife...I was afraid that he was really going to hurt her. Anyway...Well done! You are doing very well with this. I'd love to see how Katara handles those wemon later on! Update soon, Ja ne!
person Katara1923777
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry thatI havent reviewed much but Im always forgeting to sign in and i hate people who leave anyonomous comments. ANyways your story is like always amazing...! and This chapter is deffintly increeibly awesome!
person ditz4lyf
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh for some reason i thought this was the best chapter you ever did! how long is this story going to be? again, awsome job and update soon!
person darkavatar13
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u took a really long time to update you know but the story is good usual. i can't help but want a big fight between katara and the other women though
person Anonymous
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, this chapter was pretty interesting. It was a little bit too extreme for most of it. I do hope that Zuko and Iroh will be able to talk things out. Those two are real close to each other that they can trust each other with any secret no matter what. I'm glad we heard about what happened to Kiana, and I also do hope that everyone will be okay. Anyway good luck with this story, Volcano and your other stories. I hope the next chapter will show a little understanding between everyone and it will show some forgiveness for the past long ago.
person chudson
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazeing you are on my favorite authors list