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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another awsome chappie! Keep on writing.....PLEASE!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey! when I read your author's note about people not reviewing I got sad for you and decided to leave you this nice review! I have read Cold Fire, Hot Water and Volcano, I reviewed Volcano on FanFiction.net, so you might recognize me. You are and excellent writer, very talented. Your stories are great. About Hot Water, I was thinking, Zuko loves Katara, but are you going to make her fall in love with him too? It is a Zutara story, also, I was wondering if you were going to make any reference to what happened to Aang and Sokka. Please keep up the good work and good luck!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love your story. I've been reading since before the Angi Kai, but (stupid me) didn't realise that non-members could review till you mentioned it! I really love how you keep the side characters reappearing in the story, it gives a real feeling of continuity. I'd agree that you are the best Zutara writer out there. And I prefer longer chapters with longer waits, but quickness is appreciated too! Also, will Katara's new nickname stick? Katty? Are you still going to bring back Sokka, like you did with Shi-Ryuu? Please do! I love your story, and keep on writing, please! =)
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I'm usually unsure as to what to say, so I simply opt for silent lurking. But actually I've found your story to be a very good read(being one of only a few Avatar fics that I *have* read, I'm actually a tad reluctant it to call you *the* best at it, but you're definitely very good!). Seems like there's hope for Kitar, maybe...
Now, to draw your attention to a curious error, I indicate this paragraph -- ‘Kitar's dead an' buried only I remain an' Zuko an' Iro' 'bandoned me 'nough said..’ Shi said bluntly, his voice filled with She thanked Jee when he came back with a stool for her and took her seat, staring at him calmly. -- It looks like you started the next sentence before finishing the previous one, that or the computer had a tiny hiccup uploading. Might want to try and fix that. Just letting you know about it.
Well, can't think of anything else to say, so, Laters!
Now, to draw your attention to a curious error, I indicate this paragraph -- ‘Kitar's dead an' buried only I remain an' Zuko an' Iro' 'bandoned me 'nough said..’ Shi said bluntly, his voice filled with She thanked Jee when he came back with a stool for her and took her seat, staring at him calmly. -- It looks like you started the next sentence before finishing the previous one, that or the computer had a tiny hiccup uploading. Might want to try and fix that. Just letting you know about it.
Well, can't think of anything else to say, so, Laters!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I absolutely adore your work! It just keeps getting better and better!!! Sorry I never review. I think I’ve read every Avatar fanfic you’ve ever made and I don’t think I ever reviewed one of them. *hides face* I’m so ashamed! I’m just a lazy, good for nothing procrastinator who doesn't deserve to read your wonderful fanfictions. But you are hands down my favorite author on AFF.net!!! I also love your art at DA. *sigh, I just realized a never review any of your art there either* Well anyways! Keep up the awesome work! I'll try to review more often in the very near future! I can’t wait to read more!
~ With much love and admiration, Guen
~ With much love and admiration, Guen
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved that last chapter! i wonder what's going to happen when zuko finds out that katara went down into the dungeon with out him? and by the way, long chapters are good, even with the infrequent updates. i hope you update again soon!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what does the mark meeeen!!!!! lol, well i have an idea, but i wanna know!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what does the mark meeeen!!!!! lol, well i have an idea, but i wanna know!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what does the mark meeeen!!!!! lol, well i have an idea, but i wanna know!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what does the mark meeeen!!!!! lol, well i have an idea, but i wanna know!