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Yeah! I like thta chappie! I deffinatly can't wait till you write more!1 That is awesome...os...can zuko chahnge the whole no marrige laW for him and katty?~*haha,katty...i like that*~

This story is just amazing in every sense of the word! You have capture the personalities of the Avatar characters perfectly. I enjoy all your work, and you are definately one of the best Zutara authors that I have seen.

-Kassandra

Honey! You can pimp me out anytime! As for your story I must say, "WOW!!!" So intense, so real. but someting bothers me... What ever happened to Katara being pregers? Did she ever go see the Dr? Did I skip a chappie? I don't think I did. Did I tell you about the grapefruit? I hate to think I missed even one thing but you know I am old!! LOL!! Thanxs again for the hard work you put into your chappies I really enjoy them! And for pimping me out!! I'm a Smutt W@#%&!!!

Ah, an excellent piece of fanfiction. ^o^ I haven't enjoyed a fanfic this much for quite some time now!

I don't think Shi is a Gary Stu. He plays a very good role in the story without entirely stealing attention away from the Zutara-ness. None of your original characters are really Sue-ish at all. Plus, you did a magnificent job with Iroh and Kiana's little affair. I'm not exactly sure how to phrase it, but you just went about it in a way that makes the reader understand their decision - like one can understand why they did it, and that Iroh was everything Kiana should've had...*ahem* You know what I mean...^^;

Now, there is one criticism I'm going to have to make, and it's not about the story or characters - it's about the grammatical structure. Namely, you have multiple run-on sentences. At least they seem like run-on sentences to me. If you wish, I'd be more than happy to do some beta reading for you, or anything that may be of assistance to you.

So yeah, I'm very impressed with Hot Water. The canon characters seem very in-character to me, and your original characters bring their own light into the story. You've managed to bring originality and life into a story that could very easily have been cliched and dull. I look forward to seeing more of it.

I've been a very bad reader, have been following all along and don't think i've ever reviewed....bad girl bad! This is a great story I check at least weekly to see if you've added another tantalizing chapter. I'm feeling a little blue for Iroh though..I so love his character. great great job I look forward to more

Hey there. I just love this story and the one before it. I think that they are both very well written and interesting. I think it would be really neat if you wrote a story about the Death Dragon and the Dark Mist. I think it would be a very interesting spin-off.

Okay...so chapter 30. As simple as I can put it: GRRRRREAT! So what DOES Katara's burn mean? I thought of Shakespeare's sonnet when I read that actually. "Love is not love which alters when it alteration finds, or bends with the remover to remove: Oh no; it is an ever-fixed mark that looks on tempests and is never shaken. It is the star to every wandering bark, whose worth's unknown although his(her) height be taken." Update soon please although I'm not sure I'm qualified to demand that, as I myself have failed to update my story, "Wounded Honor", for two months...

This is a real good story.

Wow! It makes me sad that you plan on ending this story in a few more chappies, it is sooooo good! I hope the people at nick are reading your story! LOL! but you did say sequel, so I guess I won't start crying yet! my vote is for Zuko and His cousin to make up in case you were counting!!

I really do love this story. And 'Volcano' I can't wait untill you update again! i do want to know what that mark means. I have a vague idea but i'm not sure! anyway update soon! §¤Kira¤§