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wow...awsome! i cant wait till you update nest =D ...lol and thanks for recomending my story. thanks a bunch. =)

First of all, great chapter. A good read after a long day of school if I do say so myself. It got my imagination going. That Shi character really spices up the fanfic, so good call on bringing him in. I like him except it gets hard to make out what he says because of the accent. Oh well.

Secondly, I know how you feel about the Fav/Alert List and not reviewing scenario. I have a lot of people on that list for me and yet only about half of them review. What is up with that?

But you know what? I do that too. I guess the laziness just gets in the way. I try to review but sometimes the brain gets tired of reading and reading and just the THOUGHT of writing a review kills me. Either way, it's laziness. Sorry.

I'll try to review everytime you have a chapter up. I'll be waiting for the next installment with bated breath. :)

Great chapter. I love how you've picked Shi's psyche apart, and how Katara just wears him down with constant bedgering and repetition. Zuko's not like Ozai, I hate to see you in pain, let go of your rage, etc.

Nice. Can't wait to see what the mark means (though I think it's pretty obvious)

whoa, good chapter. i like. me like a lot. Shi is sorta kool, in a evil way. Devil, not a word.
Inner Devil: O_O

This story is truly amazing. A true work of a taleneted imagination. You must get a headache when the creative juices start flowing and you can't get the fingers to type the blasted words fast enough. I've been there. It comes out all mumble jumbled and you look at it crossed eyed as the words leak away. Truly love the story. But I feel kind of bad for Katara, is she ever going to improve her water bending or is she simple going to stay at the level she is currently at. I don't get to read the fanfics much. The only computer I have acess to is at my moms, and I live an hour away from her. So when I do get to read the stories, I don't have much time for writting. But I wanted to give a review on this one, I was hooked when I first saw it.

Aa, very nice. It's coming along very well, I really like Shi, he's turning out to be good after all! Update soon!

o...i can't wait for more! please update soon!
~Erica

i don't think i have ever left for a review for you even though i've been pretty much keeping track of your updates. i feel horrible but i'm not doing this out of a guilt trip. i saw it best that i should and besides, WHAT ABOUT THE MARK?! what? what? why would ozai kill him? will we find out in the next chapter?

how's volcano doing?

how MUCh does kitar/shi-ryuu (sp?) resemble zuko? just wondering since i read that part.

(enter stage left. head hung down in shame.) You have called me out. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed yet. I came accross this story sometime last December and was amazed by your work. I did intend to review when I first added you to my alerts, but I left for class and forgot, and I did not realize this untill you called me (others, I presume) on the carpet. Still this is no excuse. So in penance for my blatant display of reader laziness. I leave you a long review. So here goes...
Damn! You have given Zuko one hell of a screwed up family. Your Kitar/Shi-Ryuu character is amazing. You have created an original character with deepth and detail. He's probably one of the most thought
out/planned out characters on FFnet, and it shows in your writing. Your brilliance is extraodinary. The way you made Iroh come out of that rather complicated situation smelling like a rose was masterful. You managed to resolve the tension between he and Zuko with out drawing the tension out or resolving it too quickly, and with a totally believable reaction on both Zuko's and Iroh's part. You are one of the best writers in this fandom. You have a well planned out plot. The characters have been thought through, making them and their actions believable. You also have a knowledge of the culture and peoples on which the Avatarverse is based. All of this shows in your amazing work. It all adds up for one hell of a read.

Good chapter! When will she tell him she loves him? What is the mystery with the mark or brand? I think she should take the Death Dragon to the courtyard where all those cows hang out and unleash his nasty temper on them when they insult her again. Update soon!