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by Spleef

person Anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. There's hope for those two yet. And I kind of like the idea of Zuko letting Kitar wack a couple of the die-hard Ozai-lolayist generals "discreetly". Makes it easier to replace them with people who are loyal to the new regime. Well, looking forward to the next chappie. Laters!
person SleepingDragon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I loved it when Shi flipped Jee off! Jee is awsome but that was too funny!
person Scarylady
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!! This chapter made me sooooooo happy! Doesn't it just make you feel good inside when things go from torturous and heartwrenching to happy? I hope Shi finds Dark Mist...especially if he finds out something bad happened to her...eww...that could get REEEEEEAAAAAAALY messy. But I think (hope) he'll find her, though convincing her to come back might be fun...I love it when my favorite fanfiction authors update (your'e one of them if you can't tell), it just makes me so happy. ^-^ Can't wait to find out what happens next.
person La Dolce
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Ir's nice to see Jee got some props by being promoted.

I have no idea who the Dark Mist could be...she's so different. Suki?????

I thought the mark meant Katara belonged to him?
person Jo
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update-ness! Hmm... The mark, huh? Is it a bad thing, since Zuko said that she would be mad? Maybe a you're-now-a-member-of-the-fire-nation thing, maybe? Or some mark of Angi, which would make her angry because of her loyalty to Sedena? You never told us who sent the evil spirit to Katar's mother. But I'm happy for Shi! He deserves happiness. And at least soon Zuko won't have so much opposition. Whatever happened to Momo and Appa though? And Shi's parents suck. Thankyou for updating! And please don't make us suffer too long waiting for the secret of the mark! ^_^
person Airforce
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
reading it since the biggining love it and if you need knew ideas for different stories just ask
I give this story a 5 out of 5
person PRiNcEsS oF mY oWn wOrLd
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, amazing.This story is awesome...i love reading it.

~Update soon plz~
person Shadow Stealer
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Shi is human!!! That's AMAZING!!! I have to try the "scorpian" thing next time I get a chance...........
person darkavatar13
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
person Anonymous
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, this chapter is pretty good. I'm glad that Shi and Zuko knows the truth. I was a little stunned about what happened to Kiana, and I'm also glad that Zuko wasn't mad at what Katara did. I think it was silly when Shi made those funny jokes, they were a little humorous. Anyway good luck with Volcano, keep up the good work and see you later!!!!