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Sorry 'bout not reviewing for a while... schoolwork begins to pile up after vacations and the ELA and now other tests...*sigh* Any way good story, and like I say on MediaMiner.org I will leave a review when the story is done... But still... I guess i could arrange for a chorus to sing your praises but... too much paperwork... Anyway you're one of the best I've R&R'd in my years of being a net-reviewer... Keep up the good work^.^!





signed, Joshua Jehanna a reviewer and character in guild wars.
P.S. from now on my reviews will have the name Joshua Jehanna I don't mind if you call me Josh or JJ but of the tow I'd rather you call me Josh.

Wow, I love Dune too! I have all the DVD's of the newer version and the Children of Dune. Fear is the Mindkiller! This story is fucking awesome. I cheered after Agni-Kai! Also, I thought it was beautiful when you had Zuko and Katara make love. The references reminded me of Song of Solomon from the Bible when Solomon and his concubine are speaking of their passions for each other. Great work! I'm new to fanfiction, about a couple of weeks, so I'm still getting used to everything.

I love this story! It is all worth it when you put in the intricate details of each of their lives. And the flashbacks just add to the character development. Kitar is a great character, and Kasumi reminds me of Jun, but I'm probably wrong. I'm am totally engrossed in this plotline! The darkness adds to the reality of it all. Anyways, I have to go get pictures done(yuk). I hope this crack was good.........

Yay more Kitar. I love the interaction you wrote between Kitar and Zuko. You really did a great job about explaining the circumstances surrounding their pasts. I also love the scene between Zuko and Katara, their relationship is continuing to grow, hopefully enough that Katara can finally say "I Love You".

Kitar-dirty deeds done dirt cheap (well not exactly cheap)

Love the story. :) I've also been impressed by the skill you have shown at allowing the character to mature and learn of each other. Have to say it is one of my favorites (Although the spin off is awesome too..I have a thing for your presentation of the old Zuko)

*stuffs more food for thoughts so more chapters keep coming*

GOOD STUFF!!!

That's not fair. You stopped it right before the good part. I'm so depressed now.
Zuko: DOn't mind Kayko, she's always depressed.
Me: Anyway great chapter. I'm glad things worked out.
Zuko: Me too. More of me and Katara next chappy though.
Me: You just said chappy Zuko.
Zuko: So...
Me: *Shrug* Anyway update when you get the chance. Later. K15

And another hot chapter. Bravo Spleef. I'm loving this. now please update soon on this as well as Volcano :D

Hmmm...interesting.
I think that Katara's mark really means that she is betrothed to Zuko. Either that or already married.
Hurry with the next chapter, I think I know where you were going when you left off...