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this seems awesome! but i have to read the rest later...awesome story so far!

VERY GOOD!! :claps hands: and also a very good distraction from other matters at hand. When are we going to her if Katty's preggo or not? I mean you cast out the line and left it there. Where's the prize winning fish? I think she should be preggo, and I think Shi should be the one to tell him. It would be HILARIOUS! well, on to other FF's, BYE!

Wonderful chapter. I love Shi. I'm still scratching my head over Katara's mark, but that's jut because I'm an idiot. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I know I haven't reviewed in a while...but I have excuses! I've been busy!

Or...something like that...

Point being, ta-zzah! I return!

I like what you've done with Shi-chan...much more of a character now, than a random plot device. Very good.

you may want to watch out for verbal tendancies in Zuko, though...he seems..aweful even-tempered and well-cultured...almost OOC. I think he'd be a little more of...well...a guy. More Guy-ish in his turn of phrase, a bit less refined.
Not a lot, but at least some...maybe?
*tries to not sound pushy*

hmmm....I miss Aang!

Rly...the kid's gotta come back to the fire nation eventually...can't be Avatar if he doesn't know Firebending, eh?

AAAGH!!! havent you tortured us long enough?! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MOREEE!!!! PLEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE!!!!! you cant just leave it like that! thats just not cool! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!

~Wikka

It was a fantastic read so far. I can't wait to read the next installment.
The way you portray Katara and Zuko is just so entertaining. I am by far, very impressed.

Hi there, it's me again. I hope I'm not pushy, but when are you going to update this story here? I read Volcano and it was great. I'm glad you updated it, but I do hope we see another chapter here soon. Anyway good luck with thses two stories, hope you update this story soon, and see you later!!!!

thats soo goood maybe you are the best writerbin your class uh

One more word from me, and it's big news! It has been confirmed that the new season of Avatar (Book Two- Earth) will be starting on March 17th!
And, here's an interesting fact, Episode 27 is called "Zuko Alone". I don't have an episode dicription or airing date, but the title sounds promising...

Not to sound greedy, but could you please recognize me in the introduction to your next chapter? I want everyone to know about this!

Sorry 'bout not reviewing for a while... schoolwork begins to pile up after vacations and the ELA and now other tests...*sigh* Any way good story, and like I say on MediaMiner.org I will leave a review when the story is done... But still... I guess i could arrange for a chorus to sing your praises but... too much paperwork... Anyway you're one of the best I've R&R'd in my years of being a net-reviewer... Keep up the good work^.^!





signed, Joshua Jehanna a reviewer and character in guild wars.
P.S. from now on my reviews will have the name Joshua Jehanna I don't mind if you call me Josh or JJ but of the tow I'd rather you call me Josh.