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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!! Well, i dont care as long as you keep this story goin~!! :p I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CAHPIE!!!XD
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehheh, looks like Iiyashii's now firmly in her place. And nice progress on Iroh and Shi, too. Zhao's arrival should be interesting. I don't suppose when we finally catch up on Aang and Sokka they've come to a certain Earth Kingdom town/city and met a certain ultra powerful/ultra competive blind earthbender girl by any chance? Laters!
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading what you have so far and I love your story! Your characterization and dialogue are very engaging and the plot is wonderful. Good job and I hope you continue soon!
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me: long chapter
Lena: aren't they always long?
Me: ...yeah i guess but still, long chapter
Lena: update soon
Lena: aren't they always long?
Me: ...yeah i guess but still, long chapter
Lena: update soon
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee! Great chapter! Katara's so good for Zuko. I really hope it turns out in the show the way it turns out in your story: they both realize that they compliment and strengthen each other.
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I love how you tied it front and back with the "little scorpion" - so cute.
I'm glad there's been a reconciliation between Zuko and Shi, and I like that Zuko's giving his cousin his old ship and crew as a legacy to a kind of hunt. Nice.
Boy, you're just covering off all the bases with this story. I have no idea where you're going to go from here! I look forward to seeing what else you have in store!
I'm glad there's been a reconciliation between Zuko and Shi, and I like that Zuko's giving his cousin his old ship and crew as a legacy to a kind of hunt. Nice.
Boy, you're just covering off all the bases with this story. I have no idea where you're going to go from here! I look forward to seeing what else you have in store!
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bad ppl r in Zuko's family. BAD PPL!
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You never cease to surprise me! Everytime it's keeps getting better and better! Keep it up!
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD!! :claps hands: and also a very good distraction from other matters at hand. When are we going to her if Katty's preggo or not? I mean you cast out the line and left it there. Where's the prize winning fish? I think she should be preggo, and I think Shi should be the one to tell him. It would be HILARIOUS! well, on to other FF's, BYE!
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I love Shi. I'm still scratching my head over Katara's mark, but that's jut because I'm an idiot. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.