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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person seya492
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories SPLEEF!
person Fightingdreamer5
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a short chapter, but very good! Aw, mean cliff hanger! Update soon!
person flynalien
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You stop there!?! Oh please don't tell me she's pregnant. Please write more! :)
person Badgrl74
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, is she pregnant? Anyhow, got the 'Golden Path' reference. Yes, I'm a Dune dork too. I've also become terribly addicted to fan fics. Must be because I work so much, (I even take my laptop home, argh!) I must say I have enjoyed your stories, they were well written and thought out, and I hope to see more. Do you also write any Inuyasha stories? I love those too. Well, here's to your next chapter!I love Sesshoumaru!
person Vicki So
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It's hard to believe it's going to end soon!
person Katuko
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-bliink- So I've been neglecting the fanfiction community. I'm currently on vacation so I decided to catch up on some reading. For some reasons, I went for your story first. Maybe because I knew I hadn't been here for awhile...

Either way, I'm glad I didn't. Reading several chapters together really hits the spot - it made my day^^ Just me a a cup of hot chocolate, yum. I think a good chap. always motivates me to write. I thank you for that too. -goes to write- All hail SpleefMistress, Lady of ultra Zutaraness!
person Rage Spirit
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating okay!
Cool is you story!
person Zinovia
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when is ch. 34 comin!?...i am obsessed with ur story here!
person abib
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I been reading your fanfic for a very long time...
and I just want to tell you that YOUR JUST A ONE HELL OF A GOOD SUPER DUPER GOOD WRITTER!
Please update soon!
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoops! Well, that could have gone better... Why do I have the feeling it wasn't the water in the air she was shifting...then again, she probably would have noticed if it had been the water "within". And I think a few city judges are soon to be out of jobs in the near future, as well. Bet that'll stick in that jerk's craw! Well, looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Laters!