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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person chickygurl
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So...she's not pregnant? *confused*

Great chapter! XD Update soon...enough. lol
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, welcome back. This chapter was pretty good. I'm glad Katara is okay and that she'll take things easy when she practice her bending. I do hope you update "Volcano" real soon, I'm dying to see what happens next; the suspense is killing me. Anyway keep up the good work, and see you later! Oh yeah, good luck with this story, Volcano, and your sequel Tempest.
person Vicki So
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I'll take Zuko any day over painkillers, thank you very much.
person flynalien
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for not letting her be pregnant! lol More more!
person Scarylady
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah...after reading the begining of Volcano I kinda figured Katara wasn't pregnant. If she had been I figured you'd have mentioned it in Volcano. Yeah, really low bodyfat-> no menstration (misspelled). There was some major SQUEing on my part when I saw you'd updated. :D Such happiness! Excellent chapter! (warm fuzzies all around!) ^-^
person 4EverSleepingDragon
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute with a touch of lust. Loved it as usual. I'm glad that they aren't going to have a child. I just couldn't see them having a kid so young themselves.

Loved your ending comments, they sent me rolling on the ground laughing.
person Badgrl74
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I definitely want a sexy firebender that time of the month...
person crazedwriteranonymous
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Zutara to the max! Yayness! This chapter rocks!
person sokka is my homeboy
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i could really use a sexy firebender right now then...
-massages tummy- we talked about that in lifeskills last year and all the guys were like "wow that must suck" and we girls started having a whine-fest...
person seya492
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really love your stories SPLEEF! YOU ROCK!