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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person Lerie
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cannot even begin to describe how wonderful your stories are. I was up very late 3 nights in a row just too facinated by everything to want to stop reading... That made work interesting the next day.

Although I am new to this show, your works are very plausible, well written and thought-out.

I find myself eagerly awaiting your next chapter of this AND Volcano.

Thank you for giving us the gift of your writing.
person DashLeY
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the plot and I believe it is very well written.
person Joshua Jehanna
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I LOVE THIS FIC~!~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!....................... not much i can say that hasn't been said already...... ew..... some trouble in their relationship..... oh, well... i still love the fic....
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Got gove the girl points for honesty, and the jewelry does sound quite impressive. And nice to here the Taam's have been "put down", so to speak. But there's still the Zhao problem, and just a mention of where Sokka and Aang are now would be nice, if possible. Well, looking forward to the next chapter, as usual. Laters.
person Vicki So
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whimper* so sweet... it's like we never want the fireworks to end, metaphorically or otherwise. 8 )
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it's me again. Please forgive for me, but it's about time you updated this story! What took you so long? I thought it was fantastic; I think it was your best chapter ever. I love the festival and all those fireworks and performances, they were terrific. Anway keep up the good work, good luck with the others, and hope to see you real soon!
person wilderness-writer
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was so nice! The fire dance was very well described. You painted a picture that burst with the same vivid intensity as the fireworks that Katara and Zuko enjoyed. Love it, as always.
person abib
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spleef...you rock!
person crazedwriteranonymous
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The festival sounds like real fun, and I think I'm beginning to see an Iroh/Hana here or is it jsut my imagination. LOL Zuko is really horny. :)
person Fightingdreamer5
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I like this chapter. It was sweet. I'm liking Hana more and more as time goes on, but what was that thing with Iroh? Anyway, I can't wait from the next chapter! Update soon!