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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Love the twist at the end. Not enough yaoi stories out there with Venger in them. I hope you make a sequel filled to the brim with many many smutty scenes.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, now that's evil.
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_o Bwuahaha! Whoever doesn't get the humour in this needs to step back for a moment or two. What a jolly josh!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I've read this before... Oh, yeah, at ff.net. Well, I read it again, so I'll review it again. :)
The ending was a total surprise to me. Totally didn't see that coming. I can't imagine Venger being gay, but you used it to good effect for your rude little surprise. Enjoyed it.
(I hope this doesn't post twice. I had to redo it because of my lame connection.)
The ending was a total surprise to me. Totally didn't see that coming. I can't imagine Venger being gay, but you used it to good effect for your rude little surprise. Enjoyed it.
(I hope this doesn't post twice. I had to redo it because of my lame connection.)
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok............ I don't blame the Orc minions for being Squicked. WTF you made Venger GAY!
Sexuality was not mentioned within D&D I know, but in the series he WAS sweet on Shiela breiflly(The Thief)
the subtle influence of actuial warmth was within him in those moments.
You may LIKE Venger and I damn well RERSPECT the Charater in question This fic is slightlly taking a below the belt insinuation on his srexual orientation, THAT is NOT COOL and rather quite insulting.
Then again thjis is meerly MY opinion and everything is up to interpritation. Butt seriouslly , If your going to make Venger GAY give the reason a CREDIBLE reason as to WHY he is gay?
I can only assume the 'old man' was Dungeonmaster as Venger IS his son.
I have little tolleramnce foir the small bastard myself but now you are making Venger into a bigger one, Killing to Venger is NOT a trivial thing. Torture of the mind via subtle mind games is more his forte, butr Venger never was a cold blooded murderer. andf if he did decide to kill off DM's 'Young Ones' he would do it PERSONALLY and rub salt in the wounds as to WHY he was doing what he is doing in an articulate and detailed way, and he would STRETCH out their demoises in a long and adurious way.
2/5 for intruige
5/5 for spelling
1/5 for plot and reasoning
I was very dissapointed in this chapter if this was a one shot, then it sucked, BADLY it sucked worse than Kurt Angle when he was being a psychotic chasing Booker T's wife!
Sexuality was not mentioned within D&D I know, but in the series he WAS sweet on Shiela breiflly(The Thief)
the subtle influence of actuial warmth was within him in those moments.
You may LIKE Venger and I damn well RERSPECT the Charater in question This fic is slightlly taking a below the belt insinuation on his srexual orientation, THAT is NOT COOL and rather quite insulting.
Then again thjis is meerly MY opinion and everything is up to interpritation. Butt seriouslly , If your going to make Venger GAY give the reason a CREDIBLE reason as to WHY he is gay?
I can only assume the 'old man' was Dungeonmaster as Venger IS his son.
I have little tolleramnce foir the small bastard myself but now you are making Venger into a bigger one, Killing to Venger is NOT a trivial thing. Torture of the mind via subtle mind games is more his forte, butr Venger never was a cold blooded murderer. andf if he did decide to kill off DM's 'Young Ones' he would do it PERSONALLY and rub salt in the wounds as to WHY he was doing what he is doing in an articulate and detailed way, and he would STRETCH out their demoises in a long and adurious way.
2/5 for intruige
5/5 for spelling
1/5 for plot and reasoning
I was very dissapointed in this chapter if this was a one shot, then it sucked, BADLY it sucked worse than Kurt Angle when he was being a psychotic chasing Booker T's wife!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw! You no go into detail of the smex? T_T
Oh well, More D&D Slash please! :D
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He He He. Go Scribbles! A very nice little future flash - Venger is evil and corrupting after all!