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for A Girl's Troubles

by Skittles56

person Anon
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay....wtf. u dont update this story for how long and u suddenly bump this story up to the top? Either update or delete this story.
person Little Jack 2
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have one question will Aang and Sokka be in this story?,please update soon.
person XxLeftNDaDarkxX
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful 1st chapter. I find no faults in this story! It's so cool! The only request is that she falls in love with Zuko. I'm a Zutara girl and the thought of Haru and Jet winning her over is sickening. If your a Haru or Jet writer I'm sorry. But still, great story! Your humble reader,

person XxLeftNDaDarkxX
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still haven't heard an update from you yet. I think the silent bookworm fits Zuko perfectly. I just hope Katara will be able to open his heart a little bit. Jet is such a lecherous dweeb adn Haru just seems to be a nice guy and nothing more than a distraction, like Inuyasha's Hojo. I beg to god that this is a Zutara fic! Your humble reader.
person Punky
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update plz i like it
person jozepy
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far so good
i like the way you put the story
hope to see more soon
person Dukes*Girl
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story its great, really descriptive ad so in character keep up the great work :):):):)
person cateye91
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! oh! oh! i wanna know what's gonna happen! wouldn't it just be nice to be in katara's place...lol...update soon!
person King_of_Waves
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You cannot talk can you? Your story has been up since howlong? But thanx for reviewing.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?