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September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise a lot, there are questions I want to ask, but I'll see where this is going b4 I ask them, also any chance of you posting this on FF.net? You would get a lot of attention there for writing this good.
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the story really strong start, kinda lost me with the whole metamorphosis thing, but as I read on it started to get good again. Really liked chapter 4 and if you are a female I'll take you up on chapter 5. Hope a few bad reviews didn't take you out of the story game for good.
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story i just wish there was more to it
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an exellent work. The basic idea for it is good, but your follow through s been suppurb. I hope you update soon.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story when are you going to continue it?
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue this and put up a disclaimer for the new rules i'd miss this fic
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going, this is mad :)
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting, very interesting. I like the dark approach and enjoy the detail you've put into this i look forward to later installments.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good potential, dark and the interesting plot twists so far will have others besides me demanding that you put more time into getting out the next couple of chapters................. ASAP!!!!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By far one of the best Kim Possible fics I have read here or else where. I just love that its star is Ron and that he's not obsessing about Kim like in so many other fics. Its wonderful how you got Shego and Ron together platonically and if they get together later on, it wouldn't have come out of the blue like in some others fics, where POOF for no reason two characters are together for no apparent reason but to screw.