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March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, wanna see more though
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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
will there be more to this story
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i wish there was more.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
preety good start cant wait 2 see when its done #1 waz here
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have a good start and you tell your story well with great detail if you continue your story i believe you will you fine (as long as your ok righting them) so...
its up to you man
,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.peace out
its up to you man
,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.peace out
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write the next chapter
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An ok start.
more please.
more please.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice stroy keep it going
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it was rather dull i'm not a big fan of the show(think i saw it once flipping channels) and nothing really happened.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought I reviewed this but maybe you took it off... I came back because I realized I'd done a search when I found this, ha. Completely messed up thinking it was in the original section, sorry! Still funny though, looking forward to seeing if you continue.