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for The perfect wish

by englishwitch2003

person Anon
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um.....okaay...
person gof
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good idea. Needs spellcheck, but I liked the end.
person Chris
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can tell this was written by a young person. Who else would think that six inches is MASSIVE. Besides, it's about af reaking CARTOON!
person Barry I. Grauman
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"MORE....!!" Poor Timmy. What an ironic ending. Still, it's not a bad way to----but then, I'm sure Cosmo and Wanda MUST have realized that Timmy might have been a bit TOO long in summoning them...perhaps in the middle of their own copulation
["Now, let's see--WHICH end does it go...?"/"END? Oh my gosh, Cosmo, we forgot all about Timmy!!!"/"Who?"/*whap!!*/"Oh, THAT Timmy!!"/""Do you realize how exhausted he must be by now???"/"What about ME? All that effort, and I still can't figure
out..."/"If you haven't gotten it by now, you'll NEVER get it!!!"/"Well, I did...ONCE."/*whap!!*/"Okay, TWICE!!!!"/"We've got to save Timmy from himself!!!"/"But he's not alo---"/*whap!!!!*/"I sure wish I was..."/"C'mon, Lover Boy, our godchild is probably writhing in pain by now!!"/"oooh, I know how he feels....."] And so on. Very entertaining story!!!!! ;)
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
strange....
person metaldriger
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA!!! Timmy is gonna be fucked to death. What a great way to go. I need more!
person Unknown26
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT! More, please!?