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Very nice. This is the first really decent Rugrats fanfiction that I've had the pleasure to read. It actually has a plot, it has lemon, and there's actually something going on that doesn't involve incest and rape. It's a good story so far--keep up the great work and update soon! :)
Sayuri~

Quite nice, but am I the only person in the world who thinks that the more detail there is, the better?

Yay! Another good Rugrats fic. I do suggest you continue. I do have a couple of suggestions, though. First, space it out a little bit. It makes it easier to read, especially when it comes to dialogue. Second, add more details. That's pretty much it! Other than that (which is my opinion), it's great! May I suggest Kimi and Dil? A little weird, but maybe you could consider it!