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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say:
HOMFGZ! THIS STORY IS SO MUCH LOVE!
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Surprising, this story has good grammar and spelling, something extremely hard to find when you’re in the fanfiction business. And I feel that you have both Zuko and Jet's personalities down /perfectly/. OoC-ness is becoming rampant across the fanfiction sites and it kills my eyes.
I like how you didn't rush into things. Though my mind's eye is craving for a HAWT boy-on-boy sex scene, I like how you played it out. Very nice.
Its hard to fanfic a good story with Jet in it, it really is. So, naturally, I welcomed your fic with open arms. Now to continue my rampant fangirling of your story. ^_~
WRITE MORE!! WRITE MORE /NOW/!!
HOMFGZ! THIS STORY IS SO MUCH LOVE!
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Surprising, this story has good grammar and spelling, something extremely hard to find when you’re in the fanfiction business. And I feel that you have both Zuko and Jet's personalities down /perfectly/. OoC-ness is becoming rampant across the fanfiction sites and it kills my eyes.
I like how you didn't rush into things. Though my mind's eye is craving for a HAWT boy-on-boy sex scene, I like how you played it out. Very nice.
Its hard to fanfic a good story with Jet in it, it really is. So, naturally, I welcomed your fic with open arms. Now to continue my rampant fangirling of your story. ^_~
WRITE MORE!! WRITE MORE /NOW/!!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Wait, don't stop there!!!! Fine! Just hurry and update!!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gyah! I can't wait for the next chapter!!=^.^=
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Considering you only did watch the episode once, you seem to havre gotten Jet's character down pretty well, I think. And great spelling and grammar from what I see, which is kinda a rarety around here... But enough of that, let me cut to the chase... PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! Pretty, pretty please. ...With a plushie on top? I'll give you a cookie. *holds out cookie* ...uh, that's it, I guess...
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...yaoi. Yeah, I wrote Cold Fire but that doesnt mean I cant enjoy slash. ^^ I like how you write and this story shows a lot of potential. Cant wait to see more ^^
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE! Not enough yaoi in here yet, I am writting one myself.
C is for cool, which is what fanfiction is
O is for oh no! Het's taking Av over
N is for not happenin', which is what I say to K.Z.
T is for too little, yaoi and hey, yuri
I is for I want more, or else I will kill something
N is for no wait, it'll probably be my brother
U is for U, decide when to continue
E is for everybody loves a smutty story
SO P.L.E.A.S.E. CONTINUE!!!
UNLESS YOU WANT MY BRO TO BE DIE!!!
(dancers come out and start kick line as iras and dracken hold out ie)
Iras: Sorry about that
Dracken: The unrhyming song was in our heart
Iras: Whatever.
Dracken: Continue!!!
C is for cool, which is what fanfiction is
O is for oh no! Het's taking Av over
N is for not happenin', which is what I say to K.Z.
T is for too little, yaoi and hey, yuri
I is for I want more, or else I will kill something
N is for no wait, it'll probably be my brother
U is for U, decide when to continue
E is for everybody loves a smutty story
SO P.L.E.A.S.E. CONTINUE!!!
UNLESS YOU WANT MY BRO TO BE DIE!!!
(dancers come out and start kick line as iras and dracken hold out ie)
Iras: Sorry about that
Dracken: The unrhyming song was in our heart
Iras: Whatever.
Dracken: Continue!!!