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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is such a tease. WRITE MORE!!!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter plz continue
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap this is so incredibly erotic. Not continuing this should not be an option. I love it! Woah, woah, woah....
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This freaking rocks! More please!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to more.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job. your style is very nice.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can easily believe this Shego becomeing "The Supreme One".
Her demanding to know which boys violated "her" Kim and promassing to punish them is just like some stalkers I've heard about; they sometimes write to the person they lust after, saying that they will "protect" them and punish "their enamys".
Why is Shego so insistant that you be a virgin , Kim? Because you're her "princess" and better than those stupid BOYS in your school.
Kim was unnerved by Shego's strange attack. She is used to FIGHTING her and keeps demanding that Shego fight as she is used to.
Kim may have considered the possibility that some MALE crook would capture and molest her, but the idea that a FEMALE, especialy SHEGO, would want to have sex with her is obviously something that never occured to her!
I suppose that Kim cussed because she was angry and scared. I can forgive that as long it's not going to be a reoccureing theme. Even Shego commented on her "potty mouth"!
This story might be considered a counter-point to Nate's BAPTISIM OF FIRE, which has Shego afraid to move too fast fearing that Kim might DISAPPIER!
I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
Her demanding to know which boys violated "her" Kim and promassing to punish them is just like some stalkers I've heard about; they sometimes write to the person they lust after, saying that they will "protect" them and punish "their enamys".
Why is Shego so insistant that you be a virgin , Kim? Because you're her "princess" and better than those stupid BOYS in your school.
Kim was unnerved by Shego's strange attack. She is used to FIGHTING her and keeps demanding that Shego fight as she is used to.
Kim may have considered the possibility that some MALE crook would capture and molest her, but the idea that a FEMALE, especialy SHEGO, would want to have sex with her is obviously something that never occured to her!
I suppose that Kim cussed because she was angry and scared. I can forgive that as long it's not going to be a reoccureing theme. Even Shego commented on her "potty mouth"!
This story might be considered a counter-point to Nate's BAPTISIM OF FIRE, which has Shego afraid to move too fast fearing that Kim might DISAPPIER!
I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an evil evil cliffhanger to leave us on. I WANT MORE DAMMIT!!!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, more insane-shego than the more common "cute and fluffy feelings"-shego
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definitly more! Tis great!