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for Corrupting Kim

by Melody21

person Legendary
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is real good.I hope you make this fic into a competition between Shego and Bonnie.I have never read a fic where Bonnie likes Kim.Shego is real possesive when it comes to Kim that's what I like about this story.You have only 3 chapters that you have writen and have over 35 reviews writen by people.There are alot of people reading this fic and writing reviews because it's so interesting.That is one of the main resons why I read this fic.You could write this story on FanFiction.Net,you'll definetly get a lot of reviews there.Please continue writting this fic it's real good.Update Soon
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to finish it! I think it is going fine. You can't stop now!!!!
person none
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good idea you had at the spur of the moment i definatly think you should continue you really have a good capture with this, i suggest yuou keep it going, its going to be really interesting to see what the turn is going to be. Any ways keep up the good work and hope to see more chapters soon, sincerely no one
person Broken
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story, quite entertaining. Minor grammatical errors, but it does not remove the flow of the story. I do hope you continue this story soon, it has great potential.
person Bushido
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, true about needing to get them more in charater, but still a good story, I vote you work on it more, , also, the potential side plot with bonnie is a good idea, could have many "possibilities" if you'll excuse the pun
person Lil B
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue to write.
person Racer
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic.Please Keep Updating
person Prophecy
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool Story.Update Soon
person Chris
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.Please continue to write and update soon.
person Blaze
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like Shego in this story can you please write more scenes with Shego trying to suduce Kim.Update Soon