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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you take bad reviews as well as the good. This story was a bit cheezy, and there were alot of spelling errors, but most of all. If she had been having the dreams since before, then how could he have taken her virginity that last night when she had found out? What had he been taking her virginity every day for a week??? I'm just curious, im not trying to be mean or anything, but you seriously need to look over the story and figure out if everything you've written makes sense or not before posting.
And not everyone is going to like your writing, collective criticism is the key word here.
And not everyone is going to like your writing, collective criticism is the key word here.
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed readingThe Dream is Real becuase it's a great story. A very good pairing^_^
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far i wish you would write more.
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how she scream a niggas name wat she dont know
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was great!
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make another chapter please
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, first Will and now Corny! These girls got it going on, but does both of them know that the other is in love with the enemy? Will knows that Corny is in love with the shopkeeper does she know that he is snake boy or is Corny just special?
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Couple mistakes here and ther but good. Its good that you used Presant tense this time. Update soon!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but a beta is needed.... and no, I suck at beta reading so I can't do it... sound like a hypocrite I do'yoda speech*