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for Cold Fire

by Spleef

person Zeek
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving this fic so much
person KinkoOo
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAZ up? I love you fic..this is the best lemony fic i have ever read and is not corny. I love you..I saw your pic and fell in love with it. hummm your a artist and a fucking writter. I really do love you!!! thank you for the fic...its my fave to read, iv read it soooomany tyms. so im confused about this new Hot Water fic..its a continuation for this story??? ne-ways can you draw another K/J ..the one you drew was sooo hot. Could you plz??? you would make me the most happiest person n the world if you did. thannk you.
-kinko
person Lady Moon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo cool, you have just got to wright more, especially another encounterment.
person Mysti
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.... bastard. I SO Loved your story! Of course I woke up early this morning to get art and laundry done... but no. I somehow managed to stumble upon your story and just couldn't stop reading. >.< I hope your satisified with yourself!

LoL, curse you to the nine hells... I'm now going to have to make a bookmark so that I can find you again to read your continuation story.

Honestly, good job. And don't take my rudeness too serisously... I'd love to write more for a long praising review, but I am now (thanks to you) late for work! It's part my fault... I know. I could have stopped and continued reading latter...

Adultfanfiction.net.... I'll have to make an accout to put my story up here.
person Kai
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was intense! exactly as i imagined it, with her fighting him all the way, practically!
I'll be keeping an eye out for the sequel!
Love ya!
Kai
person chrissy
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've got to write a sequil to this. That was a great story.
person Zarek
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... A delicious end to a delightful story. Just one of those things that makes the night complete.
person Battygirl
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! It's me!! um....will u b writing anymore of this story cuz if u r I would like 2 know!!!! I really luv it!!!! ok that' all bye!!
person Tokimi
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Last! Last chapter! Noooo! You must write a sequel! Your story was written so well, I enjoyed it so much that now I want more!
person FANGURL309
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THE STORY. WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN THEY MEET AGAIN? MORE RAW SEX?