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XD XD I'm way to young to be reading this xD aw well. I just wanted to tell you, I have yet to read the sequel but that'll be tomorrow probly, but you need more variety in your adjectives. I know I sound like a critic, but it's annoying when it's like your reading the same scenes over and over again only worded differently. Anyways... I dunno if you'd want me to but I could send you part of my story for you to mock so I don't sound like such a big jerk xD But I think the concept was... unusal. Though I found it a bit odd that Zuko had sudden lust for Katara. I hope you don't take this very offesively, if you're going to write and post you need to know not everyone will like what it is you write *several expierences occured with me :P*, and I'm not saying I don't. Hell, I couldn't peel my eyes away from the screen even if I tried. Arg, please don't be angry at me... I get angry at myself when people get angry at me and I don't like being angry with myself D':

...wow. I just finished chapter 4 and...wow. that got me hot.

i luv this story!! u r truly talented and the sex scenes was awesome!! keep up the good work!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I would die to be in Kat's position!

FUCK ME, ZUKO!

I LOVED your story. I mean, she was out all night. Who knows what happened? But I was wondering, since youre doing requests. I hope you are! Anyway, I was hoping you could do a slight AU on that and say Katara never consented? I want to know what would have happened. And since this is my first time on AFF, could you post it on FF.net rated M? That would be awesome.Thanks!

One of the best I read In a while I liked it very much

wow.. three words,: fiery, passionate, lust. cant there be any love? good job though. (elbows spliff) guess you have a lot of experience, haha. take care and keep it up. i finally got the link! go me

wow...this was a awesome story. I wish that they put this on tv ;-)