rate_review Reviews

very good story. liked the way it tied into the original, also the adult content was considerate for us older folks. :)

I know that this is long ago finished, but a promise is a promise.This was simply great! I love you and your stories!
Jasmin

I remember reading this a looooooooooooong time ago. this is better though, more polised. good job.

A truly excellent story. Great job!

i liked it, but the discription of the sex was a bit creepy!

I remember reading this a long time ago. I had thought it was very good. But this is kickass as well...

I wonder how it would feel for you to know that this was the first Avatar fanfic I've ever read. Or even considered reading. I've crossed into new realms now. But boredom and curiosity lead me to look up Avatar adult fanfics, with no real intent on reading any- until I saw that you'd done a multichapter story on an episode I actually just watched recently, and had more than enough reviews to pique my interest. That, and I've always held a secret love for this pairing. Shh... its secret ^^;
This was an incredibly well written story, a standard to which I shall now hold all other Avatar fics, should I ever read any more. I am pleased and impressed. Excellent story!

I know! It's taken me forever to read this... You, like the rest of us Zutarians, can see the attraction between these two wonderfully crafted characters. Your writing has improved so much! I'm so proud of you! You are a pioneer in Zutara fanfiction. It was your stories I started reading...your stories that showed me that Zutara wasn"t too far fetched, and for that I will be forever grateful. Well done for a first fic.

Wow, that was as passionate as Zuko thought it was! lol. You could feel the emotion and that's rare for Zuko when dealing with emotions besides anger. He was considerably restraining his anger and I suppose that allowed some of his other emotions to make brief appearances. I'm going on to read your sequel, Hot Water, but I wanted to read this first for obvious reasons. ;) Keep up the writing and you did a wonderful job with this fic. I only hope there will be more plot in the sequel. ^^

I liked it a lot. :)