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for Cold Fire

by Spleef

person inusextoy
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O NO!! don't stop it there! add more! XD I command you slave to my wants more! X3
person Sanity through Madness
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I love it! ...just where all the love comes in, I don't know. But this definitely has the potential to be a reeeally awesome piece of ficcage, and certainly be an auspicious start for the A:TLA section here on AFF. Consider it a plea ( or a beg, if that's what it'll take... ^_^; ) to continue it!
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one:

Very nice, can't wait to read more.
person Chelsea-chan
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you don't continue I will hunt you down and form a protest march into your bedroom at odd hours of the night. ^_^
person #@#@#@
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good!
person Kellsita
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! I'm sad it ended so soon! ^_^ Please continue this, your a very good writer, and the story is awesome. I think it was very well written, and very close th=o the characters! ^___^ I really hope you decide to continue.

Wonderful.
person Zukolover
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesomely adorable fic, please continue very very soon
person Myoto
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a very interesting fanfic, but really do you gotta be like the cartoon? Always having a cliff hanger jeez and.. well it's a good fanfic you should continue I would definetly like to hear the rest of the fanfic.
person redstar
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo good i like it please write more!!!!!
person Franky
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh please write more! I could totally picture that happening... if the story line would turn like that... damn pg rating and stuff... but yeah, please right more!