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Hey, there! This is some good stuff you’ve got going on - I certainly hope you continue with this story.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

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I'm really enjoying this story and I hope you decided to update soon. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds.

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i love it you must write more. i am hooked.

rena

*smiles* an exceptional story amore^^ please continue

spectacular fic love^^ please keep going

Jin: Yay, you updated! Kudos to you!

White Wolf: If we have any kudos left...

Gin: Anyway, keep it up and write more!

Jin: Else we join Chelsea-chan's protest march in your room at odd hours of the night.

All: Keep going!

This story is great!! This is the first Avatar fic that I've read and I have to saw that it's keeping me on the edge of my seat!!!! Please update again soon!!

Hmm..pretty. Very nice. ^_^ Please do continue. And as for OOC, I wouldn't worry about it too much at the moment...we're only 10 episodes in. Who knows what will happen. My roommate and I have a few ideas, and this is a possible pairing. We laughed so hard during this episode...she kept snikcering, "he's *flirting* with her!" I found it terribly cute in my old age, I admit. It's hard to believe I was as young as Katara and had some of the same vulnerabilities. This has come across well so far, and also, good job on Zuko's...confidence. I'm not quite ready to say arrogance yet, as it seems so far he has the skill to back it up. Good work! ^_^

*claps* YAY! Another Chapter! I love your writing! Please write more! I think you're doing an awesome job!