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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was well written until you tried to give it the sugary sweet "will they fall in love now?" ending. It just seemed out of character that Katara would feel at all comforted by the man who just raped her and forced her to like it. I liked the plot idea, just not the avoidance of the psychological rammifications of a rape victim.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw. >.< I loved it. Such a lovely story. I wish you would continue it. I would review every chapter.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was without a question a well done one shot. The only thing that bothered me was that ZUko kept calling her a Airbender, but other than that this story was absolutely super ^^
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! ^^! I enjoyed this one. Your wording was wonderful, and keeping both Katara and Zuko in character does not seem to be a problem for you. I enjoyed every detail and the vivid descriptions about their actions and thoughts. Very sexy. Keep it up!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you sometimes refer to Katara as a airbender when she is a waterbender
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it had a sweet ending^.^Kinda...GREAT STORY!!!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good, but Zuko called Katara an airbender a few times, but other then that, awesome! I'd love it if you wrote more... Please? *puppy eyes*
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You may want to edit it -- you called her an Airbender numerious times when you know she's a waterbender.
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that was good. I have only see avatar perhaps once, and to be honetst, I don't know any of the characters, but that was good. I know that you are talented, but you have surpassed my expectations. Perhaps in a while, I will watch an episode to see who the characters are. Great job.