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person aaa
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay i love this!!!!
person obiwan
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa great story i hope that jenny and brad stay together finish soon i'm realy looking forward to it keep it up
person Asa Anderson
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry more people dont review this story, it's great! I can tell you put effort into it, and it's a shame that nobody seems to care.
person Dragonrider1227
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great, I can stil read this. :D This is so well written, which is hard to find in adult fan fiction sometimes. Espcially for MLAATR. Man though, It must be because i'm so emtionally attached to Jenny (I know, unhealthy and weird.) but I nearly cried reading her get raped and was most overcome with joy when her violaters got killed. In fact, I think i've still got a tear on me from reading that.
person Steve
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic! You have GOT to keep writing this!
person Damion Kitsune
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!

*cough cough*

Er, that is... I like it. Please, do continue.
person Raven
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just checked to see if you've upydated and you DID'NT please cuntinue
person Raven
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Fic! I like how you put so much effort into your story!
person animekid or protogirl here
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this is interesting...It's not like the average my life as a teenaged robot story ^_^ I really like the tension and the drama in this one! Ah....I have an idea what might happen though eventually XD

Still continue! I wonder what Xj10 would act and look like? Or what will happen with the peeps at school?