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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. *imagines Jenny with D-cup breasts* Poor Jenny in the whole thing though. Even if it did get Brit beaten up. It was kind of a bitter-sweet victory. *imagines Jenny with D-cup breasts*
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, good plot, thought you were gonna do somethin different with brit and tif but oh well, and i knew where that 15% was going, for some reason i'm really good at guessing whats gonna happen next. now remember these are just guesses so. Brad will be okay with jenny leaving him, Brad will be surprised about her having the baby, Tif and Brit will tell the whole school that shes preg and ...... well, i don't know about that part, But in the end i think brit and tiff wil somewho end up dating brad and jen and shell wil get "married" and have the kid and what not. And this story is gonna end on a high note. (basicaly leaveing the readers to decides what happens next, like in most storys.)
Any way good story hope to see more of your storys get around. You should try and writ a good danny phantom (if you want to and you like DP) because you'd prob do a great job on it like you have this story.
Any way good story hope to see more of your storys get around. You should try and writ a good danny phantom (if you want to and you like DP) because you'd prob do a great job on it like you have this story.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is badass! I LOVE it!
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*must...kill...Brit...and...Tiff...* Cool chapter. ^^
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!! I love the way you kept all the charecters in-charecter which is what some writers dont often do. It really shows that you put alot of work into the plot. The science seems very logical and it was very easy to understand. I think I might have a good idea where that 15% is going... Any plz update soon and keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SHELDON!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
neat new chapter. I wish someone would animate that final fight with Jenny and Vexus. (mainly 'cause she's fightin' nekkid) :D I wonder where that last 15% is.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is incredible. Not just a skill, but a full blown god given gift. All of the characters are perfectly in-character, and the plot is very realistic. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is EXCELLENT! I haven't seen a whole ot of stories on this site with the character and plot development you're putting into this. The science of it seems logical, too, and you've made it easy to understand. You're doing a wonderful job and I can't wait until you update again! It's amazing you wrote this much for such a small fandom. Keep up the great work!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gaah update dam you!!!!