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for A Heart's Promise

by Evilevergreen

person Tolkien Fan
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow very well written if a little confusing at first, though I was kinda meh about the ending. Number 4 shoulda been taken in by his former team mates to work with them to help he KND not pushed out for more secrets to exist between the two lovebirds. Would like to see a squeal if you ever feel up to it! very hot very well written thanks for the ride!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Numbah 1 out the woodwork, u should make a spin off of this story, same events but tie in #1's view and location during the whole SNAFU, LOL, but yeah, this was great work, lookin forward to reading some more of ur material, though this was prolly posted a while back
person Sal
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is my first KND fanfic I ever read, I thought I was a fan of #1 and #5 or even #2 and #5. I was even o.k with #3 and #4 pairings. So when I saw your story with #5 and #4 I thought it was odd and I would hate. BUT NOW after reading all of the ch.'s in one sitting it's now one Fav+ story's in the world! I love love this story so much, that I had to review (and don't review stories) and look at any and all of your other of stories to see if they will wholed me off until you update this story.(it's like a fucking fix now!)

I was starting hate you when you started making #5 be the bad guy, then she and Wally made-up THEN! YOU MADE HER GO BAD AGAIN! >,< I'm really hoping you're just joking and trying to pull all your fans legs (or hair out because that what I did!) *cries* I hope you update soon bye and keep up the great work.

p.s.: now I a huge fan of #5 and #4 pairing. NOW ARE YOU HAPPY AT WHAT YOU DID TO ME NOW! *stoups off miley pissed because of the ending in ch.19!* >:(

j/k >,<
person Kami
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg.... I did not expact that! lol .... that might sound cliche.... or maybe Im just clueless... Yah lol

o0o! Update as soon as you can.... Ive got this fic in muh favs... and now I cheack it almost everyday n.n So Yes.... Ill more then be looking out for the next installment ^-^

God... I love numBah 4 and numBah 5 together >.>
person ManChesterEngland
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow what a great cliff hanger! i never saw that coming! when r u goin to put up the nx chappie?
person SeeSee
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter!!!! I'm glad that you updated this wonderful story. Keep up the good work!!!!
person SeeSee
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is soo good. I love numbah 4 and 5. They are my favorites. I always look to see if you have updated this story. I hope Abby ends up with Wally. Good job!!!!
person Carla
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I never even thought of Wally and Abby, but now I really like the pairing. Plus Wally is my favorite KND.
Keep up the good work.
person Kendra
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is divine! I'm begging you, please update!
person BballAnimeLover89
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO NON ONONONONONO!!!!!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!! THIS STORY ROX!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!