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for The Rival

by JAAg18

person Scorpinac
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Wonder why Buttercup took off, and where did she go? Well, update asap. laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now we're cooking. Keep it coming, buddy! Keep it coming! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oookay... Interesting, moderately well paced(could due without Marysue, frankly). Update soon as you can.
person Scorpinac
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nice start up, very nice. I imagine we'll find out who the other girls are rooming with next chapter? Update as soon as you can!