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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
man this story is sooo bomb i hope you finish it soon, oh yeah what happen to bubbles?
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great. upate. oooo that ryhmed.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the fan last night and the rival this evening. To be honest with you this new one is really dragging on and doesn't seem to have much of a purpose. It's still a good story, don't get me wrong, just reading it it doesn't seem like you're building towards anything. Oh well I'll check back in a few months to see if you've updated, hope you do soon! :)
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the fan last night and the rival this evening. To be honest with you this new one is really dragging on and doesn't seem to have much of a purpose. It's still a good story, don't get me wrong, just reading it it doesn't seem like you're building towards anything. Oh well I'll check back in a few months to see if you've updated, hope you do soon! :)
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Roaches, Claustrophobia, and drowning, huh? Okay. And nice to see Princess honestly kicking badguy ass for once. There's hope for her, yet. Well, try not to take too long with the next part, pal. Laters!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic, Jayman, honestly - sorry I haven't reviewed again in a while, but work's been busy (and 70 hour weeks tend to be quite tiring on me). I don't think I can actually tell where - if at all - this has been changed from what was originally posted on FFNet. My only real question is when we'll get to see how the strangeness between Buttercup and Blossom has developed over the intervening years since "The Fan" - especially given Blossom's dream in Chapter 2. :D
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this getting heated up. But what did demon girl want the kid for? Looks like it's only going to get more interesting from here... Laters!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY you've updated! YAY! I just have to ask, though, when is the Blossom/Buttercup-ness going to continue? As dark as it may be, I'm still a big supporter of any decently written F/F pairing!
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had better keep writing this. Don't make me threaten you. This is by far one of the better stories, at least plotwise, that I've read on AFF. I'm hooked, damn you! HOOKED!
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What tangled webs we weave. And where's Bubbles hiding herself? Well, update soon! Laters!