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for Jack's Surprise

by masked1000

schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A friend of mine sent me this link and, I just have to say....this is distrubing. I'm sorry, but it is. Aside from the sheer wrongness that is this, you really should rethink how you write in the future and on less disturbing pieces.
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i sure am glad that jack had a man's dick. if it was a woman's dick, then that might be a little scary
person Dreams of Centaurs
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanted you to know something. Lions mate for short piriods at a time, 6 seconds is all the time that a male has to put his dick in the female, but they do it several times a day
person ........
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Theres only one word i can think of to describe this story...GAY.
person c0p13r
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story... gaaaaaay... the person who wanted to have sex with, not only a lioness, but a CARTOON character... gaaaaay... the person who wrote this homosexuality... gaaaaaay!!
person c0p13r
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... gaaaaaaaaaay
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.........
person dark kennith
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank god that was a dream, otherwise It would make no sence. Its not badd, aside from the well zoophila its mighty funny, and the writing is nice and casual. I like how she is in her "cartoon form", and is described as being oily.