rate_review Reviews

Wow. I had to go through like a hundred Danny Phantom stories to find one this good... that's either depressing, or a complement, depending on how you look at it. I do mean to compliment you though on this story. It was so emotional. You gave a very clear mental picture to the insanity that Danny felt. It was amazing, and if you dont think your good at sex scenes, you are sorely mistaken. Like I said... wow. That word pretty much sums up your whole story actually. So there you have it. You have one more fan of your writing abilities in me. Ta.

way cool. gonna sequel it? hmm, maybe i should check the author page... :)

You should do a sequel! I am very intregued. There are not enough of this pairing around, most slash or yaoi pairings of this show are Danny/Dash, which I have no objection to, but find tiersom after a while, and this happens to be my favorite pairing. I am very happy to see this *wipes away happy tears* Thank you.

*jaw dropps* daaaaaammmmmmnnnnnnnnn. that was awesom! COOLNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i actualy 4 got i was chatting with a friend of mine when i was reading that...................................................sorry friend! lol

I shall now worship you for this delicious Danny PhantomxFenton yaoi...::begins to worship::

whoa. deep. very sexy, but deep. i like it. do you have more like this?

Lordy, what a sexy pairing! I, for one, think thier needs to be more of this kinda stuff out there!! Great job, but now you make me wanna do one of my own! *adds it to the extremely long list of slash fiction projects*

Oh, and as for not being any good at sex scenes, I think, for the circumstanses, you handled it very well. It was sexy and provocadive but at the same time, ambiguous and mysterious. Very much how I'd imagine ghost sex to be.

Way to go, keep it up and try this link (www.squidge.org/~minotaur/classic/eroc.html) for tips on your sex scenes. It did wonders for my writing, trust me!

Your writing is...flawless. Yes, that's an appropriate word. The plot was original; unfathomable by me. It's a plot so unique, that I nodded my head (for no apparent reason) while reading it. The use of language...flawless. Simple words can't express it well enough.

You just did a (REALLY) good job mate.

Keep it up. ^_~

wow!

never thought of something like this... whether or not it was a dream.... but i could see this either way!

bravo and standing o!

:p
Yay!!! sit on a potato pan, otis! (I got that!! I understood!!)
Nice story, by the way. Don't feel bad about sucking at sex scenes, I can relate...