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for The Sky's the Limit

by Spleef

person BC1
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.
person thomas drovin
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you back again! Well that was an interesting night for our friends, I must say. They are bonding quite nicely. I LOVE IT! Update soon! I want to see what happens next!
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* tis very very good chapter you have amore^^ please continue
person thomas drovin
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Hsi-Wu gave Jade back her camera! How sweet of him! You know I think they are both making great progress! There were times in that chapter where I almost cried, the way Hsi understood Jade shows how much he cares. I look forward to the next chapter, update soon!
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smiles and kisses you* a wonderful rewrite amore and i love the title, thank you for letting me rp the scenes for it with you and please continue posting you're awesome stories i mean they are just so plainly good!
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was...by far one of the best chapters i have ever ever read *smiles* brilliantly done amore and despite what people were saying you are doing an exceptional job redoing this.

I mean in the original version Hsi Wu and Jade made up almost immediatly but in this one? Well it's a lot slower and very nicely simmered especially the tension between them.

I give you a golden star amore i truly truly do^^
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another exceptional chapter love^^ i'm proud of you *blows you a kiss* please continue with all the cool honest to goodness fun of this here story, i wanna see mores^^
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* an exceptional chapter amore:D please continue with this story
person Chad
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter ^^ Keep up the very nice work Spleef :)
person thomas drovin
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that chapter went quite well. Hsi-Wu is really determined to make an effort with Jade. If he keeps it up he'll get want he wants. Let's just hope he dosen't mess up! Update soon!