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by teakettleandscone

person Anon
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's fu**en hot...
person EvilShrimpy
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my word....that was ridiculously engrossing.

...And I completely HATE one/four slash...in any form!

...but...gods...

...add a chapter?


...please?
person power_ruff1
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is awesome. I could picture everything that happened in the story. Plus, I'm a sucker for most things that involve the Negatives. Is this a oneshot? 'Cause if it is, it's wicked awesome. If it isn't, I'm awaiting an update.
person some chick
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you've got to make that more than a one-shot!!! pleeeeeeease???
person Mystieka Senko
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story it's very well written and nice use of words the storyline is wonderfull and if you start reading...you are stuck for life ^_^
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a brillant one-shot.

I loved the dialogue of Negative Numbuh Four. He was just so creepy, that it gave me chills.

Good job, please keep it up.