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November 25, 2024 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story but I wish there was a second chapter so we could find out what they did in the shower and find out if Leela or Amy use the stuff to attract Fry.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow thats was kinda weird but cool too
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad please continue
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all in all i like the story
being a writer myself i know a good read when i see one
and you kept it short and to the point i liked that part and you still told a good story in the process
one thing though it could have used a tiny bit more detail but for your first fanfic it was good
being a writer myself i know a good read when i see one
and you kept it short and to the point i liked that part and you still told a good story in the process
one thing though it could have used a tiny bit more detail but for your first fanfic it was good
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More damn you!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good, i liked it. there were times when both girls seemed to step out of chracter, but other than that it was excellent, well done.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
during the sex sene i think you over-used the word pussy a little bit but other than that it was an awsome fic. good job!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm very glad to see another Futurama erotica up here. I think you did a good job keeping it short and to the point. It kept me interested and the story wasn't weighed down by a lot of unnecessary stuff. :) *claps*
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Leela you go girl!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!
Good job! Leela seemed a tiny bit out of character, but this was a short work. It felt a little rushed too, especially around the sex scene, but all in all a good try at a Futurama Fan Fic. Not bad at all.
Good job! Leela seemed a tiny bit out of character, but this was a short work. It felt a little rushed too, especially around the sex scene, but all in all a good try at a Futurama Fan Fic. Not bad at all.