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for stormy night

by Kiryu

person Kiggy
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very passionate and sweet story, love it to pieces, you really have some talent. ^_^
person yiffy
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it, its one of the few good stories on CL in this site, the rest are just mindless OOH YEAAH FUCK ME, i think your story was very passionately and loving, i hope you make more, keep it up 10/10 :)
person J-Bott
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was so good i read it 5 times keep up the excellent work oh by the way i read your story called Kisses that was awsome too !!!

PLZ !!!!!! WRITE MORE !!!!!!
person Lucy McGonagle
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*mouth falls open* Holy sh**!!!! Oh my God, my Neo when did you write that???!!!! *grins* If only we could *coughs* relive certain parts of that.....*grins* Yumi and Jeremie? What about poor Aelita? *grins again* Okay, I'll shut up now. *blows kiss*
person mesa
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a very awesome story but it needs more..I hate it when stories just stop so please write more when you get the chance. I enjoyed reading your story but it had alot of typos and grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed. I have not written a story but I want to. I would love to read more.
person ShadowSlayer (Too lazy to log in)
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story... lots of detail... I'm regretting not reading it earlier... I hope you write more to this one or write a new code lyoko fic... It would also be appreciated if you could read my fics and give me some advice...
person crimson from broken vien
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was pretty good. The part after they fucked and referred to each other as siblings kinda creeped me out tho.

I like J/Y. Nice job.
person old broad
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot! And I only saw the cartoon three times, and I'm even impressed.