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for Love is Fragile

by WildChildX

person Medic
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I loved this story. The pairing blew me away and what a treat. I was anxious to see who the soldier was and WOW is all I can say. yes, this does happen in real life. Wonderful job. I have to say, this was special and very tastefully done. Five stars!
person Medic
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot! D'oh!
You took a story that was a lemon and made lemonade! BRAVO! The other fic was neither amusing or funny. This was wonderful, thanks for doing my GI Joe friend justice in here with Cover Girl. Beautiful is all I can say.
person AK
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo at this impressive and very conscientiously written fic. I think I know how this story was born, and I applaud the way that you wrote this. You not only wrote what you felt, but you were very considerate of your fellow writers. Very refreshing to see. My hat is off to you. The references to the multiple colors of the roses, plus the white and the black roses were excellent added touches to the story. Major Bludd is such a badass. He is so cruel and evil, that it makes him fun to add to your story. A little romantic encounter in a ‘vehicle’ never hurt anyone.
person p&tb
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Han ~ what a wonderful story. It was written with such heartfelt emotions that it tugged at my heartstrings. You haven’t lost your touch at capturing the feelings of your characters. I have to say I was biting my nails while dh smirked at me, since he read it first. You are evil girl, but good for the “lover in question.” I have ‘never’ seen anyone take a horribly done fic, that was supposed to be fun and not taken serious, poking fun at the military, and make this “rose” bloom. Love is truly very fragile.