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January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i read the entire story and it turns out that the huntsgirl turned out to be the dark dragon in desguise, so that means that the dark dragon kissed and gave jake a blowjob. continue this story plz. reply if you are... thx
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all, great story, really got me hooked. So, all of that was a dream? Jake ans sky getting married and jake dying? All of it? And all that stuff about sky's child hood was a flashback. Am I getting this right? Anyway, hurry and update.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really love you story and i would love to read it all the way through but i cant figure out what goes where so i was woundering if you could email me a copy of it in the order it should be read.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i read your whole story again and now question why was Dark Dragon disguised as Huntsgirl? Oo
I think I will read your story again and wait for revision and new chapter^^
oh and if you can please send me a email when the new chapter is up
PS: there is a AD:JL section on aff, perhaps you should post your revision there?
keep writing
I think I will read your story again and wait for revision and new chapter^^
oh and if you can please send me a email when the new chapter is up
PS: there is a AD:JL section on aff, perhaps you should post your revision there?
keep writing
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally finished reading all 11 chapters. It's got a very nice plot. I saw some spelling errors, but overall, It was one of the best storys that I have read on this site.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! but a one other a thingy.... i a never knew a jake was a so mean...
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story I love dragons
are you making a Jake/Dark Dragon scene?
anyway keep writing can't wait until the next update
are you making a Jake/Dark Dragon scene?
anyway keep writing can't wait until the next update
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far, I'm really enjoying the story. The conflicts and emotions for the fic really feel like what you'd expect in a darker AD:JL episode. Just a few questions, though:
1. I find it rather odd how all of the magical community creatures seem to agree to the human standard of what is considered 'underage', especially creatures like the Anubians and Dragons, who obviously live for far longer than your standard homo sapien. I can sorta understand it with Jake, since he's a half-breed (with Human blood in him), and thus that would have some kind of impact on his overall life expectancy, but for Sky...I would think that he'd still be considered a youngling in his society, and thus, wouldn't be bound by the normal human age of consent laws. Neither would the Dragon Council, by that token. I just find it rather odd that the human standard of 18 is accepted by all other beings in the magical community as the age when one of their own can legally have sex.
2. Was the dream that Sky had prophetic, or just the culmunation of his innate fears over losing Jake and what the rest of the magical community would do to them, if they found out about their relationship? I can see it being either/or, actually, and you don't have to answer if it plays a significant part in later chapters, but it's piqued my curiosity.
3. Along the same lines as above, what WAS that that Jake sensed, after Sky's dream sequence? Has he formed some kind of mental connection to Sky in that instance, and it's Sky's self doubt and prejudice against dragons that he sensed? If so, would that prove that they were meant for each other? Again, you don't have to answer, if it plays a bigger part in future installments.
4. One tiny bit of inconsistency that I found was Jake's comment to Sky when they first met, when he told the Anubinoid that he was straight. The inconsistency, here, is that in the first chapter, we clearly see Jake getting off by playing with his tailhole, up to and including using his tail to fuck himself. He obviously has no qualms with it, so his comment that he's not even remotely bisexual seems rather odd.
Other than those, I really like the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
1. I find it rather odd how all of the magical community creatures seem to agree to the human standard of what is considered 'underage', especially creatures like the Anubians and Dragons, who obviously live for far longer than your standard homo sapien. I can sorta understand it with Jake, since he's a half-breed (with Human blood in him), and thus that would have some kind of impact on his overall life expectancy, but for Sky...I would think that he'd still be considered a youngling in his society, and thus, wouldn't be bound by the normal human age of consent laws. Neither would the Dragon Council, by that token. I just find it rather odd that the human standard of 18 is accepted by all other beings in the magical community as the age when one of their own can legally have sex.
2. Was the dream that Sky had prophetic, or just the culmunation of his innate fears over losing Jake and what the rest of the magical community would do to them, if they found out about their relationship? I can see it being either/or, actually, and you don't have to answer if it plays a significant part in later chapters, but it's piqued my curiosity.
3. Along the same lines as above, what WAS that that Jake sensed, after Sky's dream sequence? Has he formed some kind of mental connection to Sky in that instance, and it's Sky's self doubt and prejudice against dragons that he sensed? If so, would that prove that they were meant for each other? Again, you don't have to answer, if it plays a bigger part in future installments.
4. One tiny bit of inconsistency that I found was Jake's comment to Sky when they first met, when he told the Anubinoid that he was straight. The inconsistency, here, is that in the first chapter, we clearly see Jake getting off by playing with his tailhole, up to and including using his tail to fuck himself. He obviously has no qualms with it, so his comment that he's not even remotely bisexual seems rather odd.
Other than those, I really like the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap what a freaking great fic
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story could use a litle grammer workthrough but still amazing story great plot and great use of imagery