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for Everything you Want

by Dommi

person sheraven
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Heisenburg, that was HOT. I love the second person view, and the way you kept the emotions adult was great. And that last line? Killer. Damn, you're good.
person steph
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn.....that was hot. And wonderfully written. I think the second person POV was a beautiful touch, and I LOVE the angst in this. So good. Thank you, I needed to find something like this.
person hondafan
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was a very good story and has my favorite character,too. Keep up the good work.