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for Another Average Day

by Macelf

person yurific
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u whent toooooooooooooo damn fast if u took it a littelll swlower it would be much better so try to keep it a littel slower
person puffin
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I like it. It was well writen and had me hooked from the get go. I really liked it. Keep it up.
person ashwolfx
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Would love to see the next update. ^__^
person LuffySP
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sad. Very. It was good, if a little short, but sooooo sad! I mean, the end, that so sucks for them, that they can't be together, keep up the good yuri-work.
person Racewing
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just as much fun now as it was then. :)
person jimmie
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awsoem u should ad another chapter
person megaman writer
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good I thought it was betty at frist my frist KP fic I've read