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please cuntinue! it can't end like that!

Wow.......Just wow. How do you do it? You are totally awesome at writing things like this. The scenes, the characters, and especially the emotions. You capture them perfectly. It all made me squee with happiness. And Oh Em Gee, a Jeremie centered fic that has nothing to do with Aelita! Who would've thought?

That reminds me. When are the others coming in? ....They are coming in, right? They know how to work the supercomputer to a certain extent(In the episodes) so they should at least be able to get to Lyoko.

Updating this would make my week. Please please pretty please update!

great u have to make more chapters plz

Wow. Just....Wow. You are so incredibly good at writing these types of things. Seriously. Please continue soon!

Question! How did u go from payback to having Jeremy back in Zana's arms???????

Payback was NOT written by me... that is an alternate ending created by another writter here on the site...

Not bad of an ending and you certainly figured out where they really where. It would be great if it had paragraphs and proper sentences though... Anyway, I'm going to update now but I wont delete your version of the ending...

Very well written, I was drawn in at the very beginning but how did Xana become human and why is he interested in Jeremie? Will this be explained later on or is it basically a shmut story?

Again, I was drawn in immediately. It's very interesting how Xana calls Jeremie pet and wants him to give in to him. It makes one wonder is Xana hadn't somehow watched Jeremie all of the times he was fighting the others on Lyoko. Speaking of the others, will they be making an appearence or is Jeremy stuck in Xana's clutches?

The concept is good but it ends to abruptly. Some slight alterations, like making it fit the format the original author used and continuing so we get some more answers-like how Xana got Jeremie to Lyoko in the first place, and it could work quite nicely.