rate_review Reviews

Damn...I am literally speechless over a fic. You made a plausible story with an extremely solid plot. Given a few things had to be overlooked such as the fact that Daria went through her entire ordeal within a two day period. That is insignificant though...the real achievement is how you made all the characters IC, also making you really feel for Daria during her crisis and then feeling good for her after her resolving it, and then adding something that is often ovokedoked in the world of serious fanfiction writing; the art of being funny even during the most serious of times without taking away the overall mood of the situation. Another thing, something that plagued me during the hour or so I spent reading this was how someone could be so knoledgeable of the subject of masterbation. Given, everybody knows the basics and maybe a bit more, but you seemed to have exstensive understanding of the deed for both the sexes. Although, this story definately comes from a girls point of view, which raises the question...Are you male or female?? Seeing as how you would obviously be reading this I would appreciate the small favor of just sending me an e-mail which could just be one word:ale\ale" or "Female" and this would help ease my fro from finding out your gender. This would be a great help. I hope this isn't asking to much or if I am asking this in vain since you have probably finished writing this sometime last year. Oh well -_-...

In closing...if I haven't said it enough yet...you have done a great f***ing fic here!! ^_^

Hope to hear from you later.

Hey great story. I actually found it amusing. It was funny how Daria walks in and finds Quinn with a vibrator. The story probably isn't meant to be funny, but I thought it was very funny. Great story.

wow.... this is a really amazing story....
I went on a search somewhat like the one jane and daria was on at the beginning of the story. and i found the same type of resistance and the same social denial of what was happening at almost everyone's house. Anyway i'm sure you don't wanna hear about me... so i'll just say that this is an amazing and realistic story and you used the daria cast extremely well. Simply amazing.. you have my gratitude
keep up the amazing work... this is def. going on my faves list!
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I LOVE IT!!!!! GREAT JOB! Keep it up!

I loved it! I actually cried! i like this story, it's very well written.

My only suggestion is getting a beta reader to correct spelling and grammatical errors. Aside from that, it's very good. The characters sound consistent with the show, and I like you you let the Fas Clu Club girls grow as characters instead of having them remain entirely vapid. Good job :)

good story

Oh. My. I love this beautiful, self-affirming peice. I love Daria/Jane fic, and while this had none of the sweaty sex I (as a rampant bisexual who prefers women) live for, it did go deeper *ahem, excuse the pun* into Daria's character than I think anyone has before. I've read your other works (I'LL HAVE THE TAIL THANK YOU! caused at least seven 'sympathy' orgasms) out of curiousity, and I have to say, I don't even like X-Men:Evolution and I loved 'em!

Me and My Muse was another fabulous story, which got the 'Feral Seal of Approval' because it not only made me wet thinking about a hot gothic chick who loves depravity, but it also inspired my own muse. (Her name's Shadow and she she says to tell your muse to feel free to come over *pun intended* any time.) I'm writing a story about my invisible friend as a child who became my muse and then my lover, all in my head of course. I'd be interested to know what you'd think of it when I do eventually post it, and also if you'd like to collaborate some time.

Again, beautiful, stunning work exploring human sexuality and darker natures. Because we all need to push that limit sometimes. God knows I do.
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Very strange, I must admit, but also very entertaining, heh heh.

I love how even with the odd storyline you still managed to write the characters as they would act on the show.

One of the funniest parts in my opinion would have to be the scene where Tiffany says that "She gets energy from masturbating" and all that...brilliant!

Very good Ramsey!! Any plans for a Daria and Quinn or a Daria and Jane story?