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for CAUGHT!!!!

by Ramsey

person doubledamn
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, not as smutty as I was expecting for this site, but a fantastic story nonetheless. Fantastic work, keep it up.
person kwh
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done!
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
read this over the last two nights and i have to say a really good story over all very interesting
person Kali
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit, I was looking for something to laugh at, to see how badly someone had screwed up the characters in the series I just got done watching. I didn't find it.

You did an amazing job of keeping the characters in character while dealing with subject matter that didn't come up in the series. I noticed a few spelling and a grammar mistakes - a "your" instead of "you're" for instance - and I'm not entirely sure of the vocabulary used...but then, of course, it was never discussed on Daria, so that's not an issue. Anyway, fantastic characterization, and a very sweet story dealing with mildly adult themes while not completely fucking the characters over (pun intended).
person Lolths Champion
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That story, describes perfectly what I've done for people. How stubborn people can be. I think that anyone who ever got that sort of thing happen to them, should read this. But seriously, that is one HELL of a story. Kudos, and I tip my hat to you sirrah. *does so, big and flourishy* And also, this story taught me, that what is not seen, is not always that which is not there. There. But unseen. Very very very dangerous stuff.
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
was this the first story on aff?
person kevin sumpter
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
big fan of daria the show and the fan fics love both great job will there be more maybe jody or andrea.well hpe to read more soon your fan kts in mass
person JdWheels
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am inpressed as hell.

Not only have you captured Daria, you made a story that is plausable, timely and all around great. I am going to search for more of your writings. If it is as good a this one, they all will appear in my favs list.

Once again... good!!
person Bekll
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, stunning story. Flawless and with a moral. GREAT job.
person inspector__zenigata
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that show. the characters were perfect. Funny stuff, acidic quips running amuck.